Snow sticks to your beard.
Snow flakes dance in traffic lights
yellow red now green
you can go. Humbled
by poverty, you take things
impersonally.
There’s Van Gogh’s boots and
Basho’s sandles— Socrates,
Jesus went barefoot.
Snow sticks to your beard.
Snow flakes dance in traffic lights
yellow red now green
you can go. Humbled
by poverty, you take things
impersonally.
There’s Van Gogh’s boots and
Basho’s sandles— Socrates,
Jesus went barefoot.
This one is exquisite in the way it moves, the voice emerging from its 5-7-5 syllabics, its 3 parts, its sublimely humble finish. I both admire this poem and find myself very moved by it. Thank you for it.
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I agree. And I especially like the closing references to Van Gogh, Basho, Socrates and Jesus. A wonderful poem Tom.
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