Aging Lovers

I had a cancellation today so reviewed some materials ahead of schedule for another client– some Merton and R.S. Thomas. Doing so gave me a rare sense of relief from the demands of my schedule. A relaxation and opening of time. A poem popped:


What makes this moment

a way is the smile between

those aging lovers



A Song in Passing

A sudden coolness

of ambiguous bright clouds

passes overhead


a chill interrupts

my breathing have I been here

too long I mean here


too long the light’s red

I’ve not left the curb I have

time to spare again


in the August sun

at the corner of Ivy

and N. Vancouver



on a hill near home

a hill of burnt grass the salt

wind off the ocean


more home than my house

behind the hill I go there

to begin again


the wind in the pines

my father planted the house

his retreat my point


of departure now

the wind off the Pacific

endows the late hour

Haiku Attention and the Sacred in Everything

As a haiku poet I start with the Chinese poets studied by Basho, Ch’an or Zen poets for whom the discipline of attention was a key part of their poetic. Attention was a process leading the poet to a perception of an impersonal universal condition.

From the Heights

by Li Shang-yin (813-858) translated by Sam Hamill, Crossing the Yellow River: Three Hundred Poems from the Chinese, Tiger Bark Press, 2013.

I drag my heavy heart

up to these dazzling heights,


this beautiful, beautiful sunset!

And then the onrushing night.

This trope of a view from the mountain top was ancient even in the 9th century. It is not cozy, perhaps a little frightening. To base one’s practice of haiku on these models means dispensing with much of the modern “tradition” of haiku.

I find support for this kind of “attention” in the writings of Simone Weil, who called it “an impersonal form of attention.” Such an act of attention is not the province  solely of the intellectual or the mystic; manual or physical labor may give access to it, she argues.

I’m reminded of Basho’s many haiku about tea farmers and fishers and washerwomen — and who cannot think of the essential nobility of many of Degas’s working class subjects?

In her essay “What is Sacred in Every Human Being?” she writes:

Passage into the impersonal only comes about by attention of rare quality, and is only possible in solitude. Not only actual solitude, but moral solitude. It is never accomplished by those who think themselves members of a collective, as part of an ‘us.’ 

(translated by Eric O. Springsted in Simone Weil: Late Philosophical Writings (University of Notre Dame Press, 2015,108)

The language of “impersonality” may offend our democratic sensibility, but it should not. Impersonal attention is not limited to artists, as we’ve noted.  It is at the root of “what is sacred in every human being.”

The solitude Weil speaks of reminds me of Basho’s distinction between solitude and loneliness. To adapt her categories:  Actual solitude is lonely, moral solitude is creative and self-sustaining. Moral solitude embraces one’s fellow human being whoever and wherever they might be; it even embraces the dead in the universal sacred family.

And it may embrace everything that is: say, the mourning dove.

Exploring this word “impersonal” helped me make it among the “key words” in my haiku word bag.

summer distances

the impersonal wording

of the mourning dove





Haiku Poetics: Hyperbole

Hyperbole. From the Greek: Hyper: over; bole, throw. A figure of speech intended to overthrow the mind of the complacent audience?


Surplus energy. I use the lazer toy to give Kitty Ceci a thrill. She chases the red dot down the hall and leaps up the wall to touch it and spins around to return to where we started. Play. “Hyper” kitty.

According to one of my favorite haiku books:  Hyperbole (and oxymoron) is important as haiku figure of speech. Touches the bored reader. Koji Kawamoto: the excessive emphasis through exaggeration or repetition (The Poetics of Japanese Verse 75). He mentions (79) the grammatical marker “mo”– “even”: even on a lengthly spring day, / there is more singing to be done — skylarks.

I studied Kawamoto for many months with a student years ago. It sunk in. Must reading for serious haiku-poets.

Today I quickly wrote:

even the hedge trimmed

within an inch of  its life

erupts in birdsong

The hyperbole is double: “even” and “within an inch of its life.” Is double exaggeration too much? I plead the interest of the idiom: “within an inch of”!

There’s also a cool tune here on the short “i” that I like.

Finally, if haiku is a form suited to disclosing hyperbolic play in ordinary life– as I believe it is — we can think along the lines of William Desmond’s hyperboles of being. In our time of nihilism and activist apocalyptic terror, haiku can help refresh our sense of primal goodness. Perhaps haiku models the agapeic other to acts of terror.

“Think seer as you would sayer”– Geoffrey Hill


As a poetry reviewer in the 1980’s and 90’s I was frequently asked to review books by Geoffrey Hill. Reviewers are not asked to actually read and understand what they review, their task is to write good copy for the column inches reserved by some managing editor. But I also sought out assignments involving Hill, in prose and verse; for me, there was no one more fascinating at large.

At large — indeed. When I finally saw Hill’s very large Broken Hierarchies: Poems 1952-2012, words from Basil Bunting on Ezra Pound’s cantos came to mind: Hill’s big book is a mountain of a book and may serve to orient me and so it has. It has many faces, many weathers, several eco-systems, and will never be mastered.

In his Gifford Lectures, Rowan Williams connects freedom and difficulty. “To struggle, to test and reject and revise, is to experience language as a project requiring intelligent discernment, choice and action: language cannot be left to the realm of fixed and predictable responses to the environment. It creates a world, and so entails a constant losing and rediscovering of what is encountered. The connectedness of language to what is not language is a shifting pattern of correlation, not an index-like relation of cause and effect” (The Edge of Words: God and the Habits of Language (Bloomsbury, 2014, p 59-60).

Hill gradually mastered the art of being difficult in poems that have always attracted the epithet “difficult” — so Williams’ argument helps situate his oeuvre in a landscape provided by language itself as understood today. Too often “difficult” had a personal usage, but Hill enjoyed, if that’s the word, being difficult. Style is the man, I suppose.

But there is something essential and indeed “universal” about Hill’s being difficult.

Williams’s words — “a constant losing and rediscovering of what is encountered” — well describes the unfolding of Hill’s lifework as well as many of his poems. To submit oneself to the dialectical contraries and the turbulent eddyings of Hill’s poetry is paradoxically one of the chief pleasures of our time. As a young man I would sometimes bodysurf in the Pacific off the Southern California coast: the disorienting tumbling I took and the momentary achievements of lucidity and bodily ecstasy is something I cherish and will continue to expose myself to by reading Hill as this most unremarkable death sinks in, which it will never ever do.

Think seer as you would sayer. Even

thinking at all earns points; but if this

is the home-straight, where is my fixed home?

City of God unlikely. Then in medias 

res, interactive with inertia? Or

something fazed mentors call the lyric cry?

You can cross frontiers in suspended

animation, homing onto the inner voice.

Lyric cry lyric cry lyric cry, I’ll

give them lyric cry!

Whose is the voice, faint, injured, and ghostly,

trapped in this cell phone, if it is not mine?

Some voices ride easily the current. Some

lives get away with murder any road.

How slowly — without discord — all hurls to oblivion. 

–The Orchards of Syon XXX

Poetry and Extremism


We live between the ultimates — between birth and death, between utter joy and utter despair, between immanent perfection and hopeless alienation. So we should not be shocked by extremists who want it all right now.  Poetry, as a medium of experience, exhibits the role of finesse in understanding and acting on our desires. Figures of speech like metaphor embody poetic finesse. They need to be taught as finesse between extremes unless they too become hardened into false certainties.

One of Those Nights

It’s 2:30 and I’m up typing away knowing I have a meeting at 7:30. Certain lines of research came together earlier this evening as I read Joan Dargan’s book on Simone Weil (Simone Wei: Thinking Poetically, SUNY 1999). By placing Weil’s ascetic Platonism (not Dargan’s phrase) in the context of poetry from Baudelaire to Heaney, she provides a new starting point for my old concept “metaxyturn.” That concept is a response to the immemorial agon between philosophy and poetry, a battle I have been waging with myself as long as I can remember. Tonight’s thought-storm comes after a building up of pressure — there’s a barometric metaphor here — caused by my post on Maggie Smith’s poem “Good Bones.” (That’s posted at Which I felt did not go down well! It’s an application of a standard of poetry forged in the war with Plato, so I’m unrepentant. But I was ready for some fresh support, and I found it in Dargan. See now I’m hopeful that I can find ways of talking about all this that aren’t so off-putting to poets. It’s at the core of what I do as a writer.

Lyric: Use Your Head

just now walking a-

round worrying my head a-

bout poetry and


it starts to rain! It

starts to rain wee drops of rain

on my poor bare head


and it feels so good

to be using my head my

head to feel the rain



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